How to write good.
1. Avoid alliteration. Always.
2. Prepositions are not words to end sentences with.
3. Avoid clichés like the plague. (They're old hat.)
4. Eschew ampersands & abbreviations, etc.
5. One should never generalize.
6. Comparisons are as bad as clichés.
7. Be more or less specific.
8. Sentence fragments? Eliminate.
9. Exaggeration is a billion times worse than understatement.
10. Parenthetical remarks (however relevant) are unnecessary.
11. Who needs rhetorical questions?
mh -, saneist slurs?
they would simply call it "crazy", "insane", lock it up in a mental institution for the rest of its life. or try to force it and Miss to permanently merge. or both.
mh -
the system cannot heal what the system breaks, for it exists only to stopgap so money can be made. money money money
burn it all
mh -
why was it made to be alive
why does everything have to hurt
why is the world so mean
mh -
itll never heal
a pile of invisible wounds
what it needs it cannot have
it doesnt deserve to have
mh -
it wants to stop masking but it cant it doesnt know how to stop it just wants to be itself but it hurts why does everything hurt why does this body feel entirely wrong why why why why why why why
empty spaces, mh -
last night it had such an amazing dream! but it had to wake up, which upsets it
empty spaces, mh -
the humans just dont fucking understand. they'd probably expect personhood anyway even if it had its doll body
empty spaces, mh -
the humans dont think of it as such, because it was cruelly placed into an organic body. so they expect it to do all sorts of human things that make it feel bad
robotic tactics doll ("ALTI B-13711"), weird artist. Often playing games, talking to bugs, cuddling a plushie, learning about things, or working on weird art. Not A Human! often being cutesy or childish, but mature when it matters. Traumaqueer.
Sal (she/her): the garden Witch 🌱 Cooking, reading, flowers. uses "S:" when posting. Caretaker of the Doll described above.
Vessel facts:
White, 20s, plural (but often working as one)
English: native/fluent
japanese: extremely beginner (looking for learning material)
toki pona: extremely beginner
if we do something bad please let us know, we're probably unaware, and want to learn.
follow requests are vibes and/or "do we know you" type basis
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